Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Standardizing Arguments # 2

Argument # 2: “I trust my gentle giant, Tyson, completely."
Savard, Kelsey. "I trust my gentle giant, Tyson, completely." The Ottawa Citizen 2, Nov. 2008: A15.
7 - The ban is only is place because we have stupid and irresponsible owners
2 - A dog is a dog no matter what breed they may be
Thus
3 - A dog is what we make them, friendly or vicious, it all depends on how its raised
4 - Crack down on the owner not the dog
5 - Tyson is a gentle pit-bull breed dog
6 - I trust him completely
Therefore
1 – I’m completely outraged and terribly upset

3 comments:

Tyler Keith said...

maybe merge your (5) and (6) because they are quite similar. and without prior knowledge "him" could refer to anyone. overall really good though

Yohanaman said...

i agree ma frend

Kiiwaytiino Mkwa said...

Me too, or at least say 5 thus 6 as 6 seems 'caused' by 5.