Friday, December 19, 2008

A maddening conclusion

RDHS was a live on December 12, at 8:30, as two teams came to meet to argue if Hamlet was indeed crazy. Both sides fought hard, but it seemed the negative team (Kelsey, Mellissa, and Jessica Barton) won through sheer endurance as Mary from the affirmative team (Mackaliea, Elida, and Mary) gave up nearing the conclusion of the debate. It started off with strong arguments and logical fallacies flying back and firth but soon changed to a shouting match with no points. In the end the team of Kelsey, Mellissa and Jessica won the argument, with the agreement of all present.

The good arguments were only spoken at the outset, the rest it seemed were just repeats. The affirmative’s made strong points stating that throughout Hamlet, Hamlet clearly showed signs of having many forms of medically madness. The negatives quickly disproved this stating that it was all induced due to grieve from his father dying, thus making Hamlet acting mad. They made clear that it wasn’t madness but just strong emotions in play.

Over all the rebuttals were weak and never really disproved what the opposing side stated, they just stated again and again their own views.

After the free-for-all the entire debate went downhill. The amusing factor is that the crowd did the wave, causing a stir for the debaters. The only voice to be heard the whole time was Mary shouting something, we’re just not quite sure what. When talking to on spectator he stated that Mary “turned into an ogre, was very loud and I fought to throw something”. Not a pretty sight.

Rules were broken, annoyance filled the air and sometimes points were made. People gave up (Mary), as they just didn’t care anymore. Funny to witness, a pain to stay. Although better then some debates it still left some things to be worked on. But one thing is for sure, the negative team won, and Hamlet is declared sane.

Tuesday, December 16, 2008

The new appeal: Boredom

It was a drowsy afternoon on December 11, 1:30, at RDHS as team Dawson took on team Stephanie in a give-it-your- fight to determine if modern tragedies were better accepted or if Shakespearean tragedies are preferred. From off-topic irrelevant arguments, or lack there of, and discriminating photos, both sides with tooth and nail. The verdict? In my view the Stephanie’s pulled together as while as Rebecca, to claim the title as master debaters.

It seems the only real argument was made by head Stephanie herself, presenting the only argument in such a way that none could dispute it. Her quick words were too fast for the guys and they were soon left in the dust. Or perhaps too fast it seems, as no one else could understand a word she spoke. After a little while Ben stood tall and said with power “Appeal to boredom”, and took his seat to a chorus of cheers.

The insults rang back and forth, from blonde jokes by Dawson to “I have points and you don’t” by Stephanie. Logical fallacies made the air thick so that it was hard to breathe, so many fell asleep.

With the Bouchater on high alert the free for all turned into a full thrown shouting match, where once again no points were made by either side, and gave a lot of people headaches.

Although the hate was in air, the debate ended with love. Both sides had a group hug and shacked hands before exiting the room. While the rest of us cheered for it had ended. It set the bar, low, for the other groups to yet debate, may they do better.

Monday, December 15, 2008

Hamlet 1.4 (The extra 1.4, outline)

Intro Paragraph (I know I was only suppose to do a thesis . . .)

Everyone wears a mask to protect their identity from staring eyes. Though not literal these masks protect use more then we think. Only when we are alone with those we trust do these mask come off and the inner person shines forth. When we are hurt we put on a mask to hide our pain, we wear different masks in front of different people and for different situations. In Hamlet, every one wears a mask to hide a secret identity, and once we remove these masks from them we truly have a different view of them.

Reason: Claudius wears a mask at all times
Example: Claudius murdered his brother, the former king Hamlet, in order to become king himself. This was done in secret, with no one but Claudius knowing that the act was committed by him. When Claudius confronts anyone, he must become someone totally different. Claudius puts on a mask of his own. He is no longer the self-serving, cold, murdering man that he really is, instead he becomes a kind, caring man who does his very best to ensure that Gertrude stays with him. His mask was hiding his true self.
Example: He knows he has done wrong and only along with god does his mask come off.
“Where to serves mercy
But to confront the visage of offense?
And that’s in prayer but his twofold force,
to be forestalled are we come to fall,
Or pardoned being down?
He then answers his own question by saying,
But, O, what form of prayer
can serve my turn?
Forgive me my foul murder?
That cannot be, since I am still possessed
of those efforts for which I did the murder!
My crown, mine own ambition, and my queen.
3.3.45”

Reason: Every female has a mask she has to wear at all times
Example: Ophelia’s mask was one of social order, and as such was far more fragile then others. At the play she puts on a cool front towards Hamlet and keeps up appearances.
Example: Gertrude’s mask is one of ignorance. She refusing to belief Claudius killed her late husband. Once Gertrude believes Hamlet’s story it doesn’t affect her. Her mask is of ignorance and possible stubbornness

Reason: Hamlet’s mask was madness
Example: Hamlet blames Polonius death on his own madness
“If Hamlet from himself be taken away,
And when he’s not himself does wrong Laertes,
Then Hamlet does it not; Hamlet denies it.
Who does it then? His madness”
Example: In his madness Hamlet hurt Ophelia really bad. So much so that thought he loved her anymore, but again it was his madness for when she died he stated that he still loved her.
“I loved Ophelia,
Forty thousand brothers
could not with their quantity of love.
Make up my sum.”

Hamlet 1.6

When one goes from being sane to insane people will indisputably take notice. This can be seen in Hamlet, once he goes crazy many different people take note. Though he ways in fact NOT insane all appearances made it seem so. How? Internally Hamlet was plotting his revenge, plans within plans, to succeed he appeared to be mad so that people would think him so. All external factors said he was nuts. He begins long monologs that could may or may not be relevant to any point at all. Hamlet acted like a crazy person interpreting plays, in fact rigging plays that he himself wrote. Mad his lover mad and made everyone really mad at him. So Hamlet playing crazy is very convincing, debates have been raging to see if Hamlet is indeed crazy. Was he? No. He was just pretending. How does Hamlets plans turn out? Claudius thinks he is truly nuts and wants him killed, out of the picture. Horatio like a true friends sees through his BS, and wants to help him, and it works out for him as he is the last man standing. Gertrude thinks he nuts and betrays him to Claudius. Ophelia herself goes mad and commits suicide. What a truly happy ending, NOT!

Hamlet 1.5

“Maslow's hierarchy of needs is a theory in psychology, proposed by Abraham Maslow in his 1943 paper A Theory of Human Motivation, which he subsequently extended to include his observations of humans' innate curiosity.”


So how does this confusing triangle above relate to Hamlet? If one was to go step by comparing each level of Maslow's hierarchy of needs to Hamlet one would draw very interesting results. Starting at physiological needs, Hamlet passes with flying colors. But with every other corresponding level he fails, terrible.

Maslow's hierarchy of needs states in 'safety' that a person needs safety of family of morality among others. Safety of family was never to be found, his mother married his fathers murder, his uncle who hates Hamlet and wants him dead. Morality? What morality, he talks of suicide and wanting to kill his uncle, morals were never a barrier for anyone in this play.

That brings us up to need of love from family, friends etc. His family hatred him, back stabbed him and wanted him dead. His lover hatred him, his friends were used against him, and then he got them killed! No love for poor Hamlet!

The second highest need is esteem. Self-esteem, respect of others, respect by others.Nowhere is there to found esteem in hamlet. He talks about killing himself, and no one respects his ravings. He respects none as he wants to kill them all.

And lastly we come to Self-actualization which involves problem solving, and acceptance of facts. Hamlet's problem solving equals killing all around him and going mad, making others go mad and cause havoc. Acceptance of Facts? He could never accept that his uncle is now his step-father. He never accepts what the now has to offer!

So according to Maslow's hierarchy of needs Hamlet needs a lot, and then some more.

Hamlet 1.4





This is my quotable quote ad, using the line "Tis as easy as lying". Hope you all like it.

Hamlet 1.3

Hamlet has a very simple plot, father dies at hands of uncle, mother marries uncle, son pissed off and wants revenge. There is some fun action on the side like lover goes insane and lovers brother blames Hamlet, overall a very intriguing story. Each character has their own views of right and wrong. Every character reacts to a situation in a different way, moping, murdering, or suicide. How each one translates to their own reality influences the way the story plays out.

Hamlet, mad at the world, seeing no support from his mother or lover turns on both of them. He goes on a rampage killing and seeking out a way to avenge his father by killing his uncle. Hamlets lack of respect for life at the end leads up to his death. The second Hamlets finds out his father was murdered can be considered the beginning of the end for him.

Gertrude, seeking social status marries her husbands murdered to secure her place on the throne. She shuts out Hamlet and is oblivious to everything around her. This got her killed when she unknowingly drinks from the poisoned cup.

Claudius thinks he got away with the murder of Hamlet, and is threatened once Hamlet finds out. He sets in motion many ways of killing Hamlet all of which backfire upon himself and lead to his death, the assassinator was assassinated.

The family unit is the most important factor within society. Time and again there are examples of what happens when the family unit fails, mayhem exists. The family unit provides support and security for all, without it society would fall. It is built on order and law, which in turn are the foundation to society itself. The family unit and society go hand in hand.

Hamlet 1.2



The major families: Hamlet's and Polonius'

Crisis
Hamlet's Family:
the crisis in Hamlets family is undoubtedly the death of old Hamlet, which took place before the play. In this 'loving' family, old Hamlet is killed by his brother, Claudius, who then marries the seemingly oblivious widow, Gertrude. So individually Hamlet's crises is the knowledge that his uncle Claudius actually killed his father, Gertrude's is her guilt, and Claudius’s is his fear of Hamlet and the consequences if Hamlet should uncover the truth.
Each deal with their problems in unique ways. Hamlet is depressed and mopes around the castle which makes everyone else depressed, then he goes on a murderous rampage seeking revenge. Gertrude marries Claudius to secure her position her position to the throne. Claudius feeling safe in his position as he assassinated his brother, fakes mourning to create a front, then quickly takes the throne. He tries to get Hamlet killed, but everything backfires and everyone dies instead.

Polonius’ family:
The crisis of Polonius’ family is the king’s death and the death of Polonius by Hamlet in the middle of the play. The family is strangely not overly affected by old Hamlet’s death. But very concerned about their father’s death. Ophelia, Hamlets lover, has a bigger crisis then her brother as her lover killed her father, due to this she goes mad and ends up killing herself. Laertes really mad due to his fathers death seeks revenge on Hamlet, for the death of his father, and for the death of Ophelia and works in hand with the king. He duels Hamlet in which both of them die.

Nuclear Families:
Hamlet once had a nuclear family, with two loving parents and him. But after the death of old Hamlet in went to the dumps. No more was there love in the house and each were trying to backstab each other.

Polonius’ family is the typically nuclear family, besides the fact there is no mother present, there’s good communication, love and acceptance. Over all a good family.

Wednesday, December 10, 2008

ISU NOTE

SORRY FOR THE SCREWED UP FORMATTING. I WILL BE HANDING IN A HARD COPY TOMORROW.

Final ISU

Starship Troopers VS The Forever War










Alex van der Mout










ENG 4UE
Rockland District High School
12/10/08

Empires raise and fall on the blood of young men and women. Armies of humanity have ravaged our fair world to almost the brink of disaster. Humans have perfected the art of war so that it has become second nature to us. Only in times of great distress have enemies put aside the feuding to fight a greater evil then either one of them. That greater evil can take many different forms, as can be seen in the two novels Starships Troopers by Robert A. Heinlein, and The Forever War by Joe Haldeman. Each has its’ own villainous enemies be it bugs or the alien Taurans. When one with a love for literature compares these two excellent novels, they would see that while they are similar “[Haldeman’s] war is the opposite of the one Heinlein glorified in Starship Troopers – bloody, cruel and meaningless.”- Kirkus (Haldeman, book flap)
Every war rests in the hands of the soldiers that bravely march across the battle field to wipe the enemy from the face of the earth. Each solider must be trained and prepared mentally and physically to stand firm in the face of blood and death. Training takes many forms from strict rules and procedures to mass chaos. Starships Troopers demonstrated training as professionals gearing potential soldiers for war. Here the individual is completely wrapped in the fold of the army, educated in the way of war. In striking contrast is Haldeman’s future world, training is based on fear, fear of death.
“Now I’m gonna say this once so you better listen,” he growled. “We are in a combat situation here, and in a combat situation there is only one penalty for disobedience or insubordination.” He jerked the pistol from his hip and held it by the barrel, like a club. “This is an Army model 1911 automatic pistol, caliber .45, and it is a primitive but effective weapon. The Sergeant and I are authorized to use our weapons to kill to enforce discipline. Don’t make us do it because we will. We will.” (Haldeman, p. 12)
Haldeman showed the same training as useless and irrelevant and senseless. Here the army is incompetent, ignorant and scornful of its soldier’s lives. There was only two ways out of the army: either your mind snapped or you were carried out in a body bag. Morale was kept by poorly used rituals, and had no value.
“OK. Tench-hut!” We staggered upright and he looked at us expectantly.
“Fuck you, sir,” came the familiar tired chorus.
“Louder!”
“FUCK YOU, SIR!” One of the army’s less-inspired morale devices. (Haldeman, p. 4)
In the world of conditioning, the stupid and the smart have equal standing and both qualify to serve their country. Heinlein agreed with today’s recruitment campaigns that all come the army willingly, eager to serve their country. Each one may leave at any time, and forced to face the consequences. The Forever War was fought by drafted brilliant youth, the jewels of humanity, forced to fight and be killed.
“Were you in school when you got drafted?” she asked
“Yeah. Just got a degree in physics. Was going after a teacher’s certificate.”
She nodded soberly. “I was in biology . . .”
“Figures.” I ducked a handful of slush. “How far?”
“Six years, bachelor’s and technical.” She slid her boot along the ground, turning up a ridge of mud and slush the consistency of freezing ice milk. “Why the fuck did this have to happen?” (Haldeman, p.6)
“So here we were, fifty men and fifty women, with IQs over 150 and bodies of unusual health and strength, slogging elitely through the mud and slush of central Missouri.” (Haldeman, p.8)
As solider is only as good as the weapons that he is wielding, the best solider is nothing when he only wields a spade versus a child with a machine gun. The two novels both present a idea of powered armored suits. In Starship Troopers, one infantry man is an unstoppable foe with enough fire power to completely level a mountain. These exoskeleton suits made a man into a killing machine that could singlehandedly destroy any amount of opponents.
Our suits give us better eyes, better ears, stronger backs (to carry heavier weapons and more ammo), better legs, more intelligence (in the military meaning...), more firepower, greater endurance, less vulnerability.
A suit isn't a space suit - although it can serve as one. It is not primarily armor - although the Knights of the Round Table were not armored as well as we are. It isn't a tank - but a single M.I. private could take on a squadron of those things and knock them off unassisted […] Suited up, you look like a big steel gorilla, armed with gorilla-sized weapons.

The real genius in the design is that you don't have to control the suit; you just wear it, like your clothes, like skin. The secret lies in negative feedback and amplification. (Heinlein p. 97)
A weapon is only as good as the user, everyone can fire a gun, but not all can use it in war. If a solider misuses his powerful weapons he could not only kill the enemy but also his comrades. Any weapon is a ‘two-edged sword’. The Forever War vividly depicted how weapons can kill your allies as well as the enemy. Every wear of the powered amour could hurt himself and others as “it is easier for the user to kill himself through carelessness.” (Haldeman, p.14) Through physic-hypnosis the solider in The Forever War were turned into brutal savages with only one need; to kill. The urge was so great that not even their comrades came in the way of their killing spree.
Suddenly a laser flared through the Taurans from the other side, somebody missing his mark. There was a horrible scream and I looked down the line to someone […] writhing on the ground, right hand over the smoldering stump of his left arm, seared off just below the elbow. (Haldeman, p.60)
War is a terrible plague that ravages humankind since our first steps. Some wars need to be fought, while some millions died over an insult said when drunk. When mankind’s future is at stake no one hesitates to take up arms. The backdrop to Heinlein's Starship Troopers is a war between humanity and hive-minded insectoid aliens simply called “the Bugs". The ‘Bugs’ threatened every man and women in the galaxy. There was a need to fight for the homeland, to fight, kill or be killed.
It is an elaboration of the instinct to survive. The instinct to survive is human nature itself, and every aspect of our personalities derives from it. […] But the instinct to survive […] can be cultivated into motivations more subtle and much more complex than the blind, brute urge of the individual to stay alive. (Heinlein, 118)
Earth’s history is blackened by periods of petty wars. These wars were where humans were sacrificed for such petty matters as a leaders honor or for the greedy of those on top. So many good men were thrown into the inferno not even knowing why they were fighting. Haldmen depicted such a raging fire in his novel The Forever War. Here “Earth’s economy needed a war, and this one was ideal. It gave a nice hole to throw buckets of money into, but would unify humanity rather than dividing it.” (Haldeman, p.215) The war against the mysterious Taurans was nothing but a huge mistake, a mistake that cost the universe millions of deaths on both sides.
“The 1143-year-long war had been begun on false pretenses and only continued because the two races were unable to communicate.
Once they could talk, the first question was “Why did you start this thing?” and the answer was “Me?”
The Taurans hadn’t known war for millennia, and toward the beginning of the twenty-first century it looked as though mankind was ready to outgrow the institution as well. But the old soldiers were still around, and many of them were in positions of power. They virtually ran the United Nations Exploratory and Colonization Group, that was taking advantage of the newly-discovered collapsar jump to explore interstellar space,
Many of the early ships met with accidents and disappeared. The ex-military men were suspicious. They armed the colonizing vessels, and the first time they met a Tauran ship, they blasted it.
They dusted off their medals and the rest was going to be history.” (Haldeman, p.214)
There is one aspect however that every military veteran will agree on, as does Robert A. Heinlein, and Joe Haldeman, that is: War is frightening. In war men become beasts, tamed humans become savages lusting for blood. War makes grown men cry like little girls, never has there been a more terribly experience for man. Rico, in Starship Troopers, felt the gripping hand of fear, every time he had a ‘drop’.
"I always get the shakes before a drop. I've had the injections, of course, and hypnotic preparation, and it stands to reason I can't really be afraid. The ship's psychiatrist has checked my brain waves and asked me silly questions while I was asleep and he tells me that it isn't fear, it isn't anything important - it's just like the trembling of an eager race horse in the starting gate.
I couldn't say about that; I've never been a race horse. But the fact is: I'm scared silly, every time." (Heinlein p. 1)
Even our hero, William Mandella, had the frits before going into combat. “Scared? Oh yes, I was scared – and who wouldn’t be? Only a fool or a suicide or a robot. Or a line officer.” (Haldeman, p.67)
My stomach flipped twice and, getting out of the chair, I had to swallow back nervous bile. I'd felt about the same, every time the speaker had crackled in the two days since the first muster. It wasn't simply the fear of going into combat - that was bad enough - but also the terrifying uncertainty of the whole thing. This could be a milk run or a suicide mission or anything in between. (Haldeman, p.73)
It can be said that the two novels Starships Troopers and The Forever War while they are similar in their overall plot, they are drastically different stories. There are obvious differences such as time dilation and totally different aliens. But it is the underlining message that makes these two novels unique. Starships Troopers glorified the war. Stating that war was necessary and it was everyone’s honor to serve. This novel represents an influential and timely message about the significance of defending the patria, the motherland, and how wars needed to be fought and what it took to become a solider and a liable citizen of a human society.
On the flip side The Forever War shows how war is useless and pointless. This novel follows the course of the training of an infantryman from civilian to officer, and through that training how he copes with an ever changing world. Due to excessive time factors associated with interstellar travel at relativistic speeds, decades past on earth while mere months pass for Mandella. Upon completing his first tour of duty, Mandella finds earth changed and for the worse. It goes into a deep analysis of social change, and the hardship one faces to catch up. While Rico in Starship Troopers remains a solider because of his love for war, Mandella returns to military duty, not because he loves it, but because its familiarity destroys the alternative.
After a thousand years Major Mandella had learned to cope.
He could cope with the savagery of the alien Taurans . . .
He could cope with the deep-sleep learning process that forced the whole of Earth’s military history into his brain . . .
He could cope with having his leg blown off and the wait for regeneration . . .
He could cope with a regiment of lesbians and homosexuals who considered him a pervert . . .
But when they sent the women he loved into the future, Major Mandella really began to wonder what he was fighting for! (Haldeman, cover)
Both novels are a fascinating read for any science-fiction fan. Similar but different they have a story that makes one think about your selves as human. If there was ever to be a competition of which novel was better, The Forever War would win hands down, due to that fact that it is not just destruction and warfare but goes into the human mind and how one must cope to survive.
“What we obtain too cheap, we esteem too lightly . . . it would be strange indeed if so celestial an article as FREEDOM should not be highly rated. – Thomas Paine” (Heinlein, 78)









Bibliography
Haldeamn, Joe. The Forever War. 1. Toronto, Canada: Ballantine Books, 1976.
Heinlein, Robert. Starship Troopers. New York: G.P Putnam’s Sons, 1959.